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Hey me and a friend just made a movie today... and i just want some comments on what could be better and what u liked and stuff... http://tinyurl.com/azveq I am the one on the Trials unicycle.. my friend is the one on the Red freestyle uni.. thanks -- irvinegr ------------------------------------------------------------------------ irvinegr's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/10958 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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nice stuff! that was like 5 or 6 180's in a row. that was nice. and stick with that stand up ww. you already got the transition in and are pretty solid so thats a good. also your friends seat wrap was clean. keep at it man good job. and jimmy eat world-pain is an awesome awesome song. -- chosen respectfully, jonny 'My Gallery' (http://tinyurl.com/cw3lv) I LOVE THIS END UP open toed socks like we rock birkenstocks ------------------------------------------------------------------------ chosen's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/9281 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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i started cracking up at the credits. "peanut butter jELLAY! peanut butter jELLAY! peanut butter jELLAY! peanut butter jELLAY! peanut butter jELLAY! " -- abbabibble Cheers, Mat. ----------------------- SUPER AWEXOME SUPER-UNI SHIRTS! PREORDER YOURS TODAY!!!http://unicyclist.com/forums/showthread.php?t=44230 --"to maxis: STOP. GRAMMAR TIME." -Fwgen0moB? "abababilbel" - General Dibbles ------------------------------------------------------------------------ abbabibble's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/10751 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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haha.. Yeah it is soo fun to make movies... what would u rate this out of ten?? 10 is highest like DEFECT----0 is like SUCKEY!! -- irvinegr ------------------------------------------------------------------------ irvinegr's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/10958 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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just because of the awesome PBJ song, and that one other song... and that bit about gum, i'd give it a 10 on the comedic gold scale, and an 8.5 in the Uni vid category. definately a keeper. -- abbabibble Cheers, Mat. ----------------------- SUPER AWEXOME SUPER-UNI SHIRTS! PREORDER YOURS TODAY!!!http://unicyclist.com/forums/showthread.php?t=44230 --"to maxis: STOP. GRAMMAR TIME." -Fwgen0moB? "abababilbel" - General Dibbles ------------------------------------------------------------------------ abbabibble's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/10751 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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Well that was the worst fall I have ever seen resulting from riding backwards I liked the stand up wheel walk. -- litldude2 Gallery.unicyclist.com/spencer Litldude2 (att) aol (dott) com _____________________________ chosen wrote: wish i could be in a signature...*sigh* ------------------------------------------------------------------------ litldude2's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/6134 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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I liked your good tricks. The sequence of 180 uni spins was impressive, as were the hop-on-seat combinations, as was the stand up wheel walk. However, showing them in a video alongside clips of you hopping one-at-a-time up a set of four stairs threw me off. Basically, without those advanced moves you did, your video was kind of a "just another guy that has been riding for a year or two and is making his first video" kind of thing. Adding those big stand up wheel walk//180 unispin combos changes the entire tone of the video... I'm not sure if i'm being clear enough, or too harsh, but i really don't think that stand up wheel walking belongs in the same video as riding backwards (and vice versa). You know what i mean? Also, a tripod would really help you out a lot. Regarding editing: Complicated tranistions draw attention to the transition, rather than the footage. If that is your goal, for example if you had two love-themed shots (or a moment in the song), then a heart shaped scene out would make more sense. But when the purpose of your video seems to be "here's what i can do, what do you like, how can i learn to do things better," then the transitions distract rather than help. But that's just me being nitpicky, having just watched Shaun Johanneson's video (http://tinyurl.com/ae2lk. It's a mind-blowing video that is edited very simply. woah! Don't take me too harshly--you pull some sick tricks in your video. i wish i could 180 unispin or stand up wheel walk or .. .. .. It's just that you asked for feedback, and i figgured being critical would be more helpful to you than saying "best video ever! i loved it! perfect ten!" Know what i'm sayin'? -- TheBadger587 Gliding, finally. AIM:TheBadger587 ------------------------------------------------------------------------ TheBadger587's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/5576 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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most of these ppl watching the our movie are haters, i have only been riding for 3 months!!!! no respect these days no respect -- danny ------------------------------------------------------------------------ danny's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/10999 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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danny wrote: most of these ppl watching the our movie are haters, i have only been riding for 3 months!!!! no respect these days no respect Most of the people watching your movie are -not- haters. I started watching the film, but it was like zillions of others that I've seen before, so I stopped it short. That means no disrespect to you or your riding skills. I have been riding for about 8 months, an I still can't go round corners properly! Don't take what maxis says to heart - he often comes across as negative even when he's being positive! I for one regard him as a bit of a 'local character' and the fora wouldn't be the same without him. Above all don't feel that you are getting flamed for your first movie. Keep riding. Hooked -- totally_hooked "The banana is big, but its skin is even bigger." - George Orwell ------------------------------------------------------------------------ totally_hooked's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/10069 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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Nice job with the unispins, makes me want to get over my fear of them. -- siafirede ------------------------------------------------------------------------ siafirede's Profile: http://www.unicyclist.com/profile/6057 View this thread: http://www.unicyclist.com/thread/45805 |
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