treepotato's unicycle poem

here is a uni haiku i just thought of

the hot blazing sun-
I hop the wheel on the rock,
Sweat runs down my neck

im no basho, but the basic elements are there (syllable count, seasonal
word, combinaton of old and new, circular pattern, etc)


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these unicycle poems are great!


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hopeful - revelling in the glory of 700c

a sawzall...!? why not just use an axe. -- Jagur

Long live the Lotus -- Mojoe
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We're starting poetry in English now. I -obviously- have to do one on
unicycling, so sometime soon I'll post one here.


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James_Potter - ***** ***** *****

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the world try to figure out how you did it.-
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I wrote an excellent poem about my optical mouse. I won't write much
poetry. I will have to keep unicycles in mind next time i am
enlightened.


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Rayden
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